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I love the way you had full stops I think the picture should have a curly fern
I think that is really good but i think that you should have changed the colour of your writing it was a bit hard to read i think it should have been purple.
Hi Maddison I really like your fern poem.next time try not to put numbers in your poem.
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ReplyDeleteI love the way you had full stops
ReplyDeleteI think the picture should have a curly fern
I think that is really good but i think that you should have changed the colour of your writing it was a bit hard to read i think it should have been purple.
ReplyDeleteHi Maddison I really like your fern poem.
ReplyDeletenext time try not to put numbers in your poem.