Tuesday 10 May 2016

Cinquain Poem

3 comments:

  1. I like the the way how you put in a funny picture. You mite what to put in a little bit more colour.

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  2. Hi Maddison I like the way you put that photo in it goes well with the writing
    I like the way you talked about what Monkeys do it is so cute
    I think you need to work on spelling

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  3. Hi Maddison, I like the way you put the photo in it looks good with your writing. I also like the way you talked about the baby monkeys. You need to work using another colour for your writing.

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